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Screaming tears
Shatter silence,
Holding on --
They only bleed.
Crimson tears --
They never die,
Just cover themselves with scars.
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For :iconsimplypoetry: 's prompt for this month, this is the 'form' thing. The format is 3, 4, 3, 4, 3, 4, 7. Called a "Whitney." I hope you guys like it... =P

6-30-09

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:iconpermanent-insanity:
this is great! ^_^

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~Insanity-Stock
~Lyrics-Community
"I'm not crazy cause I take the right pills every day" - Jimmy Eat World, Bleed American
:iconsocially-suicidal:
:) thanks, im always paranoid about the syllables in these kind of poems =P

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You are
Everything.

You make me
(empty.)

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:iconpermanent-insanity:
I was looking at the words, not the syllables
the words are awesome ^_^

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~Insanity-Stock
~Lyrics-Community
"I'm not crazy cause I take the right pills every day" - Jimmy Eat World, Bleed American
:iconsocially-suicidal:
Hahaha wup, thanks again =P

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You are
Everything.

You make me
(empty.)

Proud member of rawem0tion: [link]
:iconpermanent-insanity:
anytime ^_^

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~Insanity-Stock
~Lyrics-Community
"I'm not crazy cause I take the right pills every day" - Jimmy Eat World, Bleed American
:iconsocially-suicidal:
:) thanks so much, happy ya like it

--
You are
Everything.

You make me
(empty.)

Proud member of rawem0tion: [link]
:iconpunk-lime:
:O I love this one...:love: :+fav:

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While I was busy waging wars on myself you were trying to stop the fight~Hate Me-Blue October
:iconsocially-suicidal:
Woo thanks :)

--
You are
Everything.

You make me
(empty.)

Proud member of rawem0tion: [link]

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